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For those who want to help Japan , you can donate using PayPAL through here;
[link]any little help Im sure willl be appreciated..:')
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Altough I'm still in a mourning mood, I still have to improve my drawings.So thats why I really need critique from you guys. I know its kinda pathetic asking like this, but if I just wait most likely noone would ever critique my work..

Finally now I have subbie again, now i have activated all the critique box in my deviation.
simply choose one of my artworks bellow you want to crits, in return...well, I suppose Ill return the favor to you too*only if you dont mind of course*. for those who dont have subbie you can simply put your critscm in my comment and thats ok, for those who have subbie it prefereable to put your critiscm in the box~If you dont, well thats ok too..^^
Here be the artworks(Updated);














I really need to know where my weakness and how to improve, so i beg you dont be to shy in voicing your opinion of my artworks. I dont expect a "good" critiscm or such, simply tell me what you see wrong in the picture and advvice if you can, thats all.
every critscm on my picture is valuable~
Thx for the attention..:')
jadi disini saja langsung........
masalah ada di.................................. klo soal gambar na saja tanpa warna shading dll, kurang detail.
soal warna, karena saya sedikit buta warna saya nyatakan ok /geplak
bagus iya, epik blom.
self exploration bwat merasa apa yg kurang dari gambar lo sndr coba~~
hayo coba coba coba~~~~
mungkin kadang bingung, tapi..... ya.... diushakanlah~~~~ /tabok
segitu saja..... sekian.............
he he yah, thx buat masukannya..^^
masalah shading.